Score: 6

"Hackneyed"

submission: Valentine's Day Special

date: February 15, 2005

David Firth your cartoon was jaded and predictable. You've type-casted yourself with asinine violence, depleting any shock value hoped to be obtain from this short. As always I'm a fan of your artistic style but is it too much to ask for a different angle from David Firth? Send me into a tunnel of intrigue without a flashlight...not to a Milkman rerun. However, I guess you've made front page so congratulations. Your best work to date is the first burnt face man.

Score: 5

"a little reptitive...but overall thumbs up"

submission: Nightmare B4 Halloween 13

date: October 28, 2004

so the basically im supposed to take a screen shot and open up MSpaint during the 30sec prep period?... huh, good game.

Score: 8

"Great job."

submission: Doodieman: The Hero's Loa

date: October 25, 2004

It would seem you had a lot of fun storyboarding for a SuperHero whose powers are derived from....well, doodie. The theme was communicated nicely and I think I felt the intended emotions...(energetic, fun, fun-ny at the begining then a little sad towards the end). As far as animation goes the transitions were smooth, however, there is room for improvement concerning the artwork.. (best animation is when Doodie man takes a monster shit).

The first time watching it I couldn't help but think how repetitive-ly annoying the music loop was. But after hearing the commentary I realized your disk was fucked up. Oh well.

The animation overall seems nothing more than a Plug for your Post-Simpsons Career website. You haven't responded to that many replies and you haven't a profile for us to see. Give some credibility to the NewGrounds audience.. We aren't all idiots and could help your grow creatively with our criticisms.

+m3d1c+

Score: 10

"UnParalled"

submission: Fallen Angel: Teaser

date: September 14, 2004

Simply in awe. The presentation, the angles, the sound effects, the coordination. everything was so beautiful and flawless. this must have taken a long ass time. phenomenal work and ill be awaiting the real thing.

p.s. - that was a pretty hot chick.

Score: 7

"Queerly Amused"

submission: Matts Movies 1

date: August 1, 2004

despite the acute "cheesiness" of your movie i actually found my self liking it. pretty funny stuff man. id say there is room for improvment on video quality (i know it takes up a lot of space). Also maybe an adventure (korny kung-fu/pirate style duel). just throwing some things out.

Score: 8

"Another great instalment"

submission: Salad Fingers Episode 3

date: August 1, 2004

a fitting addition to the Salad Fingers Series. I don't know whether to tell you "good work" or refer you to a Sanitarium. Although this one was equally as eerie it just didn't do as much for me as Ep. 2 did. nonetheless beautifully executed and consistent.

Score: 5

"It was good"

submission: Proximity

date: July 30, 2004

It was a good game; not a bad concept. sometimes it was hard to see where the computer went and that bugged me.

Score: 7

"I agree with Vexare"

submission: End of the schoolyear

date: July 18, 2004

the animations and conversions from real life to cartoon were smooth. the flash did seem like the intro to some kick ass series about highschool... maybe there is some potential for a series - id watch it if the writin was good. hmm, did you ask all those individuals about conceding their images to New Grounds... :) . keep up teh good work.

Score: 6

"nice"

submission: Mr. Man Ep. 1

date: July 18, 2004

not bad.. although the graphics were subpar the home-made sound fx were hilarious...its almost like your going for the Bob the Ball humor..but its just not quite there yet. keep working you've got potential.

Score: 8

"MY SUBMISSION BELOW"

submission: Delta Strike

date: July 17, 2004

good job man.. the graphics were good but the movie was kinda short and there wasn't any plot to suppliment it. interesting music though but why did the music quit towards the last fifteen seconds? nice job.