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Hackneyed

David Firth your cartoon was jaded and predictable. You've type-casted yourself with asinine violence, depleting any shock value hoped to be obtain from this short. As always I'm a fan of your artistic style but is it too much to ask for a different angle from David Firth? Send me into a tunnel of intrigue without a flashlight...not to a Milkman rerun. However, I guess you've made front page so congratulations. Your best work to date is the first burnt face man.

Great job.

It would seem you had a lot of fun storyboarding for a SuperHero whose powers are derived from....well, doodie. The theme was communicated nicely and I think I felt the intended emotions...(energetic, fun, fun-ny at the begining then a little sad towards the end). As far as animation goes the transitions were smooth, however, there is room for improvement concerning the artwork.. (best animation is when Doodie man takes a monster shit).

The first time watching it I couldn't help but think how repetitive-ly annoying the music loop was. But after hearing the commentary I realized your disk was fucked up. Oh well.

The animation overall seems nothing more than a Plug for your Post-Simpsons Career website. You haven't responded to that many replies and you haven't a profile for us to see. Give some credibility to the NewGrounds audience.. We aren't all idiots and could help your grow creatively with our criticisms.

+m3d1c+

UnParalled

Simply in awe. The presentation, the angles, the sound effects, the coordination. everything was so beautiful and flawless. this must have taken a long ass time. phenomenal work and ill be awaiting the real thing.

p.s. - that was a pretty hot chick.

a little reptitive...but overall thumbs up

so the basically im supposed to take a screen shot and open up MSpaint during the 30sec prep period?... huh, good game.

It was good

It was a good game; not a bad concept. sometimes it was hard to see where the computer went and that bugged me.

MY SUBMISSION BELOW

wow, was it just me or did Link have some crazy ups? I mean, highflying-michael jordan-nba dunkin ups. anyways it was a good game..a little simple and the first boss was a little boring (waiting forever to strike)...and im pretty sure you used the background to Super Mario World on SNES... overal nice work but could improve. keep working.