Score: 6

"Hackneyed"

submission: Valentine's Day Special

date: February 15, 2005

David Firth your cartoon was jaded and predictable. You've type-casted yourself with asinine violence, depleting any shock value hoped to be obtain from this short. As always I'm a fan of your artistic style but is it too much to ask for a different angle from David Firth? Send me into a tunnel of intrigue without a flashlight...not to a Milkman rerun. However, I guess you've made front page so congratulations. Your best work to date is the first burnt face man.

Score: 5

"a little reptitive...but overall thumbs up"

submission: Nightmare B4 Halloween 13

date: October 28, 2004

so the basically im supposed to take a screen shot and open up MSpaint during the 30sec prep period?... huh, good game.

Score: 8

"Great job."

submission: Doodieman: The Hero's Loa

date: October 25, 2004

It would seem you had a lot of fun storyboarding for a SuperHero whose powers are derived from....well, doodie. The theme was communicated nicely and I think I felt the intended emotions...(energetic, fun, fun-ny at the begining then a little sad towards the end). As far as animation goes the transitions were smooth, however, there is room for improvement concerning the artwork.. (best animation is when Doodie man takes a monster shit).

The first time watching it I couldn't help but think how repetitive-ly annoying the music loop was. But after hearing the commentary I realized your disk was fucked up. Oh well.

The animation overall seems nothing more than a Plug for your Post-Simpsons Career website. You haven't responded to that many replies and you haven't a profile for us to see. Give some credibility to the NewGrounds audience.. We aren't all idiots and could help your grow creatively with our criticisms.

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